Assignment_Write-Up

I have finished my most of the materials for this project, which is ready to be animated but I'm not all the way done with all my drawings or elements. 

I also have my revised animatic mov.

animatic write-up

This is my animatic for the proposal piece that I'm working on. Now when I look back on this piece I see a lot of problems coming out. It's still not clear about being slow and controlled so I will need to beef that aspect up. Also, I noticed that some of my story is not really integrated.